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Judging Problems Stamp by SparkLum Judging Problems Stamp by SparkLum
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:icondarkjediprincess:
So true! The people who overlook your problems and like you for who you are—They're your real friends.

Now, on to critiquing. I'm finding it a bit difficult to read the text on this stamp, but hey, I guess that's what happens when you have a limited amount of space to work in. I'm not sure if you'll be able to increase the font size without running out of space, but I'd give it a shot anyway, just to see. From here it looks like the font in the larger blurb of text is italicized? That's making it a bit harder to read, I think, combined with the embossing effect you seem to have going.

One grammatical nitpick: you're missing an apostrophe in "won't". At the current font size you can add it in without running out of space. Not a big deal, though. It's something that bugs me personally, but also something I can overlook.

Positives? The embossing effect does work, and the message is one that needs to be said. I like the typeface choice—easy to read. And you definitely have a way with textured backgrounds that don't distract too much from the text. Other than the sizing and style issues, it's fairly easy to read. Good work, adding to my stamp collection, and this'll probably replace one of the ones on my journal. :) :+favlove:!
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RecklessKaiser Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
Another truthful stamp, Lumi; you're getting better at these. :+fav: 8-)
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mirz333 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011   General Artist
Amen
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